Fix up, edit APA 6th Report on lifespan developmental science


Hey all I need help editing and fiing up this report based on the attached assment criteria sheet, attached word document with feed back provided in the report as comments.It is a pass/fail grade so I need ot mae sure I pass this essay.

please find attached ithe critera sheet and detailed instructions and my report which has feed back. I need you to make sure you fix up or follow the feed back and it meets the requirements set out in the instrution crteria seet.

must be apa 6th edition.