I need my essay proof read, I also need a solid conclusion

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Humanities

the concluding must match my thesis, I have the entire essay set up in the structure I want as well as topic sentences I want and I DO NOT want my essay to be sooooo damn different that I might as well have done it myself?

Please do not change my intro thesis

You can add sentences the the body paragraphs without changing my topic sentence or messsing up my cling sentences

I have began the conclusion and I have 3 sentences so that your set up for the correct idea

Please just a simple proof read and add like 3 sentences to each body so that I meet page requirements

At least a solid 4 pages

I have 3