Read and critique the essay below. Critique essay as well as quality of writing.

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Humanities

Read and critique the essay attatched below. Has to be at least 2-3 pages and MLA cited. Please use plenty of outside sources, stats, and data to support the thesis. Essay and essay outline files are all attached along with notes taken about the essay.

outline for essay

https://modesto.instructure.com/files/1595941/down…

article to critique

https://modesto.instructure.com/courses/18533/file…

notes from article

https://modesto.instructure.com/courses/18533/file…


topic sentence examples/ideas

https://modesto.instructure.com/courses/18533/file…


titles and hooks

https://modesto.instructure.com/files/1596090/down…


main points to include

https://modesto.instructure.com/files/1591622/down…


Also fill out this outline based off of your own essay. Attached below. You will need username and log in for the links. Will be provided when tutor chosen.