English essay editing: Paraphrase and correct the grammar. (1000 words)

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Humanities

I’ve wrote a introduction of my thesis, but some of the sentences are collected from other articles without paraphrasing, and some sentences might have grammar errors.

Therefore, I need some help of
1. Paraphrase some paragraphs.
2. Correct the grammar and smoothen the sentence into academic style

I have marked ‘which help do I need’ in every paragraph.
Some paragraphs need to be paraphrased, some only need to be smoothen!

The essay is in the attachment.

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