Peer Review: Rough Draft


Read the two papers carefully(the files I uploaded). In separate response posts to each writer, answer the following questions with some detail:

  • What is the main idea of this paper? How clear is the thesis? Is it arguable? Focused?
  • What comments do you have on paragraph structure? Are topic sentences clear?
  • Why are paragraphs in the order they’re in? Is it clear? Where could it be clearer?
  • Comment on the research. Do the sources seem to pass the CRAAP test—are they credible sources? Is there fair representation of multiple points of view?
  • What is strongest about this paper?
  • What could use some more work?