English essay editing: Correct the grammar/ Smoothen the sentence. (3500 words)

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Two essays which is about the ‘research result’ and ‘discussion’

Essay1 (500 words)
Need help of:
(1) Paraphrase some paragraphs.
(2) Correct the grammar and smoothen the sentence into academic style.
(I have marked ‘which help do I need’ in every paragraph. One paragraphs need to be paraphrased, other only need to be smoothen!)


Essay2 (3000 words)
Need help of correcting the grammar and smoothening the sentence!

The essays is in the attachment.

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