Completely rewrite

Humanities

Completely rewrite one page of your critical analysis/evaluation. DO NOT JUST EDIT. You must completely rewrite the page in order to receive full credit. You must also provide a paragraph of reflection explaining why and how you redrafted this section of your annotated bibliography or critical analysis/evaluation.
In summary, your writing exercise should clearly label and include the following:
1. About a one page section of the original draft of your critical analysis/evaluation;
2. About a one page rewritten new draft of this section of your critical analysis/evaluation;
3. At least a paragraph reflection explaining why and how you redrafted this section of your critical analysis/evaluation.

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the attachments provided below

1)a teachers comment about my previous critical analysis evaluation .

2) ill provide my annotated bibliography essay . their will be URL links in the essay. ((GO THROUGH THEM PLEASE)) this will help You know what i am talking about ( this will be where ull get the info to finish this assignment )


3) & 4) and my previous critical analysis evaluation paper + instruction on how to make one


Thank you .